untold secrets

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Eponine (If you find a rare Gem, hold it tightly!) on Friday, 01-Jul-2005 20:34:02

Here you are on my mind again, you are my best untold secret. But the more I think about you, the harder it gets to keep it. You are one so full of mystery, out of my league and out of reach, So of these thoughts and feelings, I have for you I dare not speak. I speak of no emotion, I speak not of the heart. For You and I can never be, We are too many worlds apart. Of this I'll never tell you, and no one else will see, That you're my best untold secret, and you will always be.

Post 2 by Chris N (I just keep on posting!) on Friday, 01-Jul-2005 22:15:48

Well-written and haunting, in a way.

Post 3 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Saturday, 02-Jul-2005 9:55:53

Hello, I like this poem. Its well said and and it relates to how I feel. Do you have a site where you post all your poems. I really wanted to read them.

Post 4 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Saturday, 02-Jul-2005 10:29:32

Brilliant! & choc full of realism ..better still you could try and publish them ..

Post 5 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Saturday, 02-Jul-2005 10:39:22

Brilliant! & choc full of realism ..better still you could try and publish them ..

Post 6 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Saturday, 02-Jul-2005 11:30:46

Yay, Bridgie! I love it! I've felt that way lotsa times...

Post 7 by swigjr23 (Newborn Zoner) on Saturday, 02-Jul-2005 14:18:01

this poem is different, I'm not mutch in to poems, but its prety good

Post 8 by Eponine (If you find a rare Gem, hold it tightly!) on Saturday, 02-Jul-2005 15:15:13

Haunting, yes, quite the effect I was striving for. All of my poetry is based on my own feelings and experiences, therefor, each poem was a reality at some point. Well, I do not have a website as of yet where I post my poetry, but maybe some day I will. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Smiles.

Post 9 by Go Away (Generic Zoner) on Monday, 04-Jul-2005 22:59:39

i agree you should create a website. i really think it is wonderful to write about your feelings

Post 10 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 05-Jul-2005 2:47:19

Woe Bridgette, I love this poem. I really love it.
Big hugs
Ines.

Post 11 by Eponine (If you find a rare Gem, hold it tightly!) on Tuesday, 05-Jul-2005 9:21:49

Thanks you two. It is my most recent one. *smile*. It expresses how I feel quite well.

Post 12 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Tuesday, 05-Jul-2005 9:45:08

There is nothing worse than that feeling

Post 13 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 05-Jul-2005 15:28:46

True, agreed.

Post 14 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Thursday, 07-Jul-2005 13:24:10

especially when the poem haunts you if it was a song I'd be in danger of having it permanately on repeat

Post 15 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Friday, 08-Jul-2005 5:45:53

Hmm, maybe not permanently for me but ... I would buy it, that#s for sure.

Post 16 by Q (Take my advice, I'm not using it anyhow.) on Saturday, 23-Jul-2005 12:20:56

May I be so bold as to ask permission to wright music for this poem, Bridgette?

Post 17 by Eponine (If you find a rare Gem, hold it tightly!) on Wednesday, 27-Jul-2005 16:11:52

Oh, I would be honored! Or any other stuff you want to put music to! YeaYeaYea!